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QL Damsel 02-20-2003 09:20 AM

918 The Valley of Death, Part II
 
The Valley of Death, Part II
June 27, 1982


Happy Valley Conference Center, Santa Cruz, California


Sam leaps into a very significant person in Al's life and must save a woman from dying of a heart attack. In the process of doing this, he drastically changes Al's life.


Written by: R. Joy Helvie


Our rating system changed this season and consisted of six raters and two back-up raters! We took the average of six raters and came up with an average for that episode. Based on ratings of 10 being the highest and 1 being the lowest, the average of this episode was: 9.13

Now, it's your opportunity to rate this particular story. Let the author(s) know how you rate this story. If you'd like to give feedback, please go ahead and leave a reply!

Thanks,
TVS Team

Dman176 06-06-2003 03:11 PM

Wow, Joy,

Your writing amazes me. Great job, dear! :D

alsplacebartender 06-06-2003 05:19 PM

I agree Joy, this story was well worth reading. I even used Al's mother's name in the Starbright Project cannon.

Quite enjoyable!

jmstone65 07-23-2003 08:43 PM

That was just a great story outstanding writing.Keep the great work

Vince Beckett 05-25-2006 07:17 PM

This is a great ending. It's wonderful that Al and his mother patched things up.

ohboy 12-21-2009 03:25 PM

I enjoyed reading the second part of this. The ending was fulfilling, and while it was a bit sad, it was realistic and I think that you made a better story for it. While most people like happy endings, not everything can always end well, and I think that adds the depth to your story that was necessary.

This was a great episode, and I think that you did a nice job dealing with Al's emotions in relation to his mother, as well as balancing the general objective of the leap and how Sam was dealing with it. I notice that in some episodes, there is way too much focus placed on the project. However, I think that you kept the story related to the leap, and Al's past, and not on the project. Great job!

tina_als_girl 12-21-2009 05:21 PM

Thank you for the comments! I live on feedback. :)

DeadZoneLeaper 12-21-2009 09:13 PM

Ohboy, you are probably gonna be disappointed with later stories then because some of them balance between Sam's Leap and events happening at the project and expand upon ideas touched upon in the final tv episode (such as Al The Bartender) or the evil leapers to name a few examples... The real world has changed since Quantum Leap was cancelled by NBC and later stories will reflect that thru not only Sam's leaps but the project as well... In the QL universe, Sam has been leaping for over 10 years, change is inevitable (as are new ideas and directions to take the premise)...Not trying to be rude here but I figured you deserve a heads-up as to what expect in later stories...


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