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Date: Fri, 14 Jan 1994 16:02:06 -0800
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Subject: Two Dweebs & A Little Monster- Part 5

PAGE TWENTY-TWO

Panel one
ACTION:	Sam's holding the gun and trailing the little band of crooks. The
police run to seize the men. 

Panel two
ACTION:	Mary runs to 'scoop' Bobby in her arms, oblivious to the gun. She
smothers him with kisses. Sam's lopsided grin gets his holographic friend
laughing.

MARY:	Oh, baby. Mommy's so sorry!

AL:	You did again, Sam. Len, Joe and Ben get prison, but Len is out in just
a year. He uses his time to--

SAM:	What?

AL:	Study law. He's a defense lawyer back in Iowa. 

SAM:	A lawyer?		

Panel three
ACTION:	

AL:	His daughter, Terry, had been left with relatives but was then shuffled
between foster homes. Now  she's happily married and has a career in--of
course, law with her dad.  By the by, you'll love the tabloids. 

SAM:	Tabloids?

AL:	Ben couldn't keep his mouth shut and Bobby is headlined as an alien
baby who  "Captures Crooks with Karate, Knows Future."

Panel four
ACTION:	Sam turns to see the hand-cuffed gang of three stuffed into the
back of a patrol car.  Mary continues to smother Sam in her bosom while,
Katerich and Bruce are speechless - drop-jawed.

SAM (a la Bogie):	See ya in eight to ten boys.

AL:	Stuns 'em every time. 

Panel five
ACTION:	Sam and Mary are eye-ball to eye-ball again.

MARY:	Boo-Boo?

SAM:	Mama?

Panel six
ACTION:	Though the men are still speechless, Mary just chalks it up to
hearing voices again.  Sam hands her the gun.

MARY:	Thanks, Sweetie.  Here, Pete. 

Panel seven
ACTION:	Without looking, Mary  hands the gun to an open mouthed Katerich.
While she turns Sam around.

MARY:	Now lets check your diapers,  young  man.

Panel eight
ACTION:	With panic in his eyes, Sam starts backing away from her searching
fingers.  Fortunately for our hero, the bottom half of Sam is in Leap
effect. 

SAM:	Oh, no!  AAAALLLL!!!

LEAP OUT


 PAGE TWENTY-THREE

Panel one
ACTION:	Back at the room with Donna. The form she's holding which contained
little Bobby, is now in a leap effect.  Sam still has his thumb in his
mouth. NO DIALOGUE.

Panel two
ACTION:	Tight on Donna as a single tear rolls down her cheek.

Panel three
ACTION:	Sam and Bobby are no longer there. The body is comatose during this
in-between leap stage. The thumb has fallen from the mouth. Behind her we
see the door is open and a young 32 year old woman standing in the frame.
She is a brunette with long tresses pulled back in a band. She wears a lab
coat. There are slight wisps of a white streak in her pulled-back bangs. 

Panel four
ACTION:	Donna is clutching Sam's body tight. The woman puts her hand on
Donna's shoulder  and bends in.

SAMMY-JO:	Dr. Alysi? We must put Dr. Beckett's body back in prep.

DONNA:	He's gone again.

SAMMY-JO:	I know. This must be hard for you, but I promise we'll get him
back.

Panel five
ACTION:	The two woman look at each other. Profile shot.

DONNA:	I know you will, Dr. Fuller.  I know you will.

Panel six
ACTION:	The final shot is a close on Al, who is now in the doorway. He
looks pained, knowing but unable to speak. Knowing Dr. Sammy-Jo Fuller is
Sam's daughter. Knowing that Dr. Donna Alysi is Sam's wife. And knowing he
can't tell either of them. 


END
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An alternate ending to this was to have Sam/Bobby leap out and
in his place would be nothing. If we take the opening lines
literally - his body "vanished" when he stepped into the
accelerator and would continue to do so between subsequent
leaps. Any opinions either way? Let me know. And thanks for
reading!


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