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From: andrew@shaws.demon.co.uk (andrew shaw)
Subject: Re: The Power Of Love
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Reply-To: andrew@shaws.demon.co.uk
Date: Thu, 15 Sep 1994 04:00:13 +0000
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This is the second chapter in this story, I hope you are enjoying it.

			THE POWER OF LOVE
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Chapter Two
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	As they walked out of the toliet, Sam was still feeling gobsmacked,
	"You mean like in Romeo and Juliet?"asked Sam
	"Yeah, you could say that...."Al was interupted by upon seeing a female
teacher come out of a room, that had a body which could knock anybody dead, Sam
saw a girl walk up past him, who smiled at him, Sam hesitated a smile back.
	"Al, who's that,"Sam whispered
	"Oh that's Miss Heartwall, I hope she doesn't have a wall in front of 
her, for me."
	"No, not Miss Heartwall, that girl over there,"
	"Oh, that's Maria,"said Al still mystified by Miss Heartwall
	"So you going to ask her out today or what?"asked Chris
	"Oh...yeah...today.."said Sam
	Sam gingerly walked towards Maria, ashe did, he could vividly remember
the first time he asked someone out on a date.
	"Hi, Maria,"
	"Oh, hi, Phil,"said Maria
	"Er...I...was wondering...if you wanted....to go...."
	Sam broke off he was waiting for Al to suggest somewhere to go.
	"Oh suggest the cinema,"said Al
	"...To the cinema on Saturday?"asked Sam
	"Well...my father...oh....alright then...I'll meet you there at say
six o'clock, okay?"asked Maria
	"Yeah..see you there then.."
	Sam proceeded to walk over to Chris with a grin on his face.
	"Way to go, Phil!"exclaimed Chris

	*	*	*	*	*	*	*	*	*

	A while later Maria had been waiting for her father to come back from
work, she had been waiting nervously, as she knew perfectfully well that her 
father would ban her from going out with Phillip, unless she told him something
else....a lie.....
	She heard the car pull up outside, and she started to walk to the front
door, twiddling her thumbs as she went along.
	"Daddy!"she exclaimed, as her Dad walked through the door,
	"Hello darling,"
	"Dad, can I go to the cinema on Saturday with....."she began to hesitate
	"Yes dear?"
	".....With my friend Lucy?"asked Maria
	"Yes, okay, but if I catch you with any boys then you will be big 
trouble."said her father sternly
	"Yes, Dad,"said Maria meekly

	*	*	*	*	*	*	*	*	*	

	Sam was on his way to the cinema, when Al suddenly appeared behind him,
	"Sam?"Al looked grave
	"Yes,"asked Sam, he knew that something bad was just about to happen as
he had seen that look on Al before.
	"In original history, Maria's father catches them going out togther, 
so all I'm saying is be careful out there, Sam,"
	The bus stopped and Sam got off, he walked towards the entrance of the 
cinema, at which he saw Maria waiting for him.  
	"Hi, there, Maria,"
	"Look, Phil, I didn't tell you this before, but my father mustn't see 
us togther, because he doesn't like me going out with boys at my age."
	"Right, then, shall we go on?"
	"Yes, okay then,"
	They walked in together, to get the tickets, and Al followed them, 
hopefully getting a chance to see a free film.
	After about a while, Al looked round, and looked startled, he nudged 
Sam, 
	"Ermmm...I'm just off to the toliet.."
	They walked round, and Sam was greatly annoyed.
	"What??"asked Sam
	"Well, two rows behind you, Maria's father is sitting, well you better
think of something, or you won't be able to change history."

		END OF CHAPTER TWO

Any e-mail, comments to andrew@shaws.demon.co.uk
I know I'm not a good writer, but I can come up with some good ideas.

Andrew